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by Mohamad Faramarzi
Mon Apr 26, 2021 9:30 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi. Please assess my essay. Thank you.
Replies: 0
Views: 25203

Hi. Please assess my essay. Thank you.

Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy? It is often argued that the prime way to feel happiness in life is to be rich. Being wealthy makes one content since they do...
by Mohamad Faramarzi
Sat Apr 24, 2021 4:30 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi. Please assess my essay. Thank you.
Replies: 3
Views: 8478

Re: Hi. Please assess my essay. Thank you.

Hello Mr. Schultz
Thank you so much for your time and invaluable feedback. Thank you for your generous work.
You are a true blessing to me and a great help in my preparation for the test.
Hope you and your family the best.
by Mohamad Faramarzi
Tue Apr 20, 2021 9:01 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi. Please assess my essay. Thank you.
Replies: 3
Views: 8478

Hi. Please assess my essay. Thank you.

The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree? It is often argued that the continuous popularity of purchasing products online will eventually cause the closure of all stores in cities. I completely agree with this view because onl...
by Mohamad Faramarzi
Sun Apr 18, 2021 5:16 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi. Please evaluate my writing. Thank you .
Replies: 3
Views: 8485

Re: Hi. Please evaluate my writing. Thank you .

Hello Mr Schultz
Thank you very much for your precious time,
your generous work, and the invaluable feedback.
I really appreciate it. Watched your video, it was excellent.
Thank you so much.
by Mohamad Faramarzi
Sat Apr 17, 2021 1:21 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi. Please evaluate my writing. Thank you .
Replies: 3
Views: 8485

Hi. Please evaluate my writing. Thank you .

Some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. While it is preferred by some to have like-minded friends, I completely agree with others who would rather having friends with...