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by masudsust07
Thu Aug 07, 2014 5:59 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: plz reviw it: mass media versus politicians infuence onpublc
Replies: 2
Views: 5130

Re: plz reviw it: mass media versus politicians infuence onp

thanks a lot. your advice will help me to improve my writing. :D Saqibali
by masudsust07
Tue Aug 05, 2014 5:57 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: plz reviw it: mass media versus politicians infuence onpublc
Replies: 2
Views: 5130

plz reviw it: mass media versus politicians infuence onpublc

Recent research has shown that media like the Internet and TV have a greater influence over people’s lives than politicians. Which do you consider to be the greater influence? In today’s world, people’s lifestyles are shaped by many factors. Even though, politicians have a certain influence on peopl...
by masudsust07
Mon Aug 04, 2014 12:54 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS GT Writing Task 2 - Pls Comment on my essay attempt 2
Replies: 11
Views: 2025

Re: IELTS GT Writing Task 2 - Pls Comment on my essay attemp

try to use synonyms of words such as because of , as ,since instead of due to. you have used this word a lot of time. put more emphasis on introduction and maintain logical sequence. gook luck :)
by masudsust07
Mon Aug 04, 2014 12:44 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Practice Writing Task 2 (please check)
Replies: 2
Views: 3661

Re: Practice Writing Task 2 (please check)

conclusion need a little more improvement. overall writing pattern good but relevant example and support idea should use. good luck... :)
by masudsust07
Sun Aug 03, 2014 8:55 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: plz correct my task 1 diagram process
Replies: 1
Views: 10201

plz correct my task 1 diagram process

The diagram below shows how rainwater is reused. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. The picture illustrates the various stages involve in recycling natural water collected from rain. First of all, the falling rainwater from sky...
by masudsust07
Sat Aug 02, 2014 6:51 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: plz have a look on grammatical error and structure
Replies: 1
Views: 511

plz have a look on grammatical error and structure

The graph illustrates the proportion of men and women workers involved in various professions in terms of gender and types of jobs in the UK for a particular year of 2005. The most striking point was the participation of women in administrative and secretarial job. The figure was 22 percent compared...
by masudsust07
Sat Aug 02, 2014 7:54 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please have a look on my task 2 on online media vs printed
Replies: 1
Views: 3044

please have a look on my task 2 on online media vs printed

With the recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspapers, and magazines will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that these forms of media will never disappear. What is your opinion? In the modern world, the advancement of technology i...
by masudsust07
Fri Aug 01, 2014 7:58 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2 -Today, the quality of life in large cities.
Replies: 6
Views: 3630

Re: Writing Task 2 -Today, the quality of life in large citi

With the recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspapers, and magazines will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that these forms of media will never disappear. What is your opinion? In the modern world, the advancement of technology is...
by masudsust07
Tue Jul 22, 2014 8:21 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please access my writing task 2
Replies: 3
Views: 3501

Re: Please access my writing task 2

The inequality between rich and poor nations is now wider than it has ever been before. What do you think are the main causes of this difference and what do you think can be done to reduce the gap? In today’s world, the developed nations are experiencing greater development than poor nations. Theref...