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by Manugoyal123
Tue Sep 23, 2014 4:50 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Could you please correct my letter and provide feedback
Replies: 3
Views: 1082

Re: Could you please correct my letter and provide feedback

Hello Fazil, You have made a good attempt to perform your tasks. However, the following suggestions may help you to fetch a better score First of all i think you need to little exaggerate the letter as it contains only 160 words in which the words are also taken from the question. Secondly always tr...
by Manugoyal123
Thu Jul 24, 2014 4:54 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: teacher wanted !
Replies: 1
Views: 771

Re: teacher wanted !

I can help you. Skype id - manu.goyal4
by Manugoyal123
Wed Jul 23, 2014 2:44 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my Task 2(Using Communication Technologies)
Replies: 3
Views: 1453

Re: Please assess my Task 2(Using Communication Technologies

This is a good essay. The requirements of the task statement are well covered, the arguments make sense and are presented in a coherent, easy to follow way, the range of vocabulary is wide enough and the writer shows fluency and flexibility. Overall this looks like an IELTS Band 7 essay. People spen...
by Manugoyal123
Wed Jul 23, 2014 1:24 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls correct my essay on international tourism
Replies: 1
Views: 1156

Re: Pls correct my essay on international tourism

Although I am not an expertise in evaluation of writing. But still i tried to improve your essay with my knowledge. Hopefully it would be helpful for you. :D International tourism industry has grown rapidly in the last fifty years in terms of the expanding number of people who travel to explore new ...
by Manugoyal123
Wed Jul 23, 2014 12:58 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please rate my writing. Thanks in advance :) :D
Replies: 1
Views: 496

Please rate my writing. Thanks in advance :) :D

Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? The issue of whether the universities should give admission on the basis of 50 % quota to both male and female students has sparked a heated debate. While some argue that a...