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Hi Ryan and all, I attempted IELTS two times for getting PR. I scored 8.0 at my second attempt other than for writing. I applied for a review but it didn't change the results. I am struggling with my writing, and this time I found your writing essay structure and working on it. I'll be sitting for ...

Hi Ryan and all, I attempted IELTS two times for getting PR. I scored 8.0 at my second attempt other than for writing. I applied for a review but it didn't change the results. I am struggling with my writing, and this time I found your writing essay structure and working on it. I'll be sitting for t...

Hi guys,
Please check my essay and suggest improvements. Please estimate the band it should get !

Some people think that environmental problems are too bi for individuals to solve. Others, however believe individuals can also do something to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Nowadays, world is facing different environmental challenges. Due to the mammoth scale of s...

Any idea on the band deserved ?

Some people think that government should band dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your opinion. All over the world, there are plenty of people who are willing to engage in high risk spots, activities and adventure...

Piazzi wrote:In my opinion, you already has achieved band 7.0

Look the band description given by IELTs, and you will notice that your essay fill the features of a band 7 essay.

Thanks for the comment.

Hi
Try to use the essay structure proposed by Ryan.Clearly mention your thesis, and better be realistic by giving real world examples instead of stating about gods.
Good luck.

It would be helpful if you point them out.

hi saqibali,
Thanks. Can you rate my essay. Does it need some more to get band 7?

Hi,
Noted that you are inconsistent on the bank charges, earlier it is 35 where you say it is 30 in the later part of your letter. Also, Better to say assurance than full proof. I feel still you can reduce your number of words.

Thanks, do you think the essay introduction and coherence is not good for band 7 ? I need to achieve it somehow. pls comment.

It is ok to use firstly, secondly and finally.Isn't it?

Pls comment on my essay no 02. What should be improved ?

02.question Watching TV is an effective way of educating children. Children should be encouraged to watch TV regularly at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this ? Answer: The effectiveness of teaching young people is largely increased with the use of multimedia based t...

It is a good one. I felt it would be better to give a specific example in the first supporting para.

Your write up is good, but from IELTS writing exam evaluators' perspective it lacks coherence. You have many good ideas, but it would be enough to have just two ideas extended and explained well. The thesis is clear, but in your first supporting para it is not directly linked with an outline,discuss...

Hi AwolsEsl,
Thanks for the comment. I agree with you,the examples could have been more relevant and elaborated. I think it is because of lesser ideas I could gathered during the brainstorming session.

Others, comment pls.
Best regards
Charles205

Hi Everyone,
I am trying to reach band 7 for writing. I took the exam twice and end up with 6.5 for writing. Please comment and help me to improve.

Thanks in advance.

Writing Task 2 question Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions. Answer: The degradation of life indices of major cities has drawn the attention nowadays. The reasons for this seem to be varied and relocating industries and modern city planning will...