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Please evaluate my essay.Thanks for your time. Essay Topic: Financial Education should be a mandatory component of school program; to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. Financial management is one of the most important sectors to be considered. Every individual should be taugh...

Hi Bunni, I feel your essay OK. i feel you are trying to break the sentences to make entire sentence. please see below findings: 1) youth is totally obsessed by getting latest mobile devices --> by getting (not required i feel), youth is totally obsessed with latest mobile devices 2) Although there ...

Hi Ryan, I am kumar and i am taking IELTS exam to migrate to Australia. Very SAD... thing about me is i have attempted for 5 times and i was never able to score 7 in each band. I know that it's my mistake that every time, i givemy exam without any minimal preparation .I am not trying do defend mysel...

my version......... In today's world, the use of mobile phones is ever increasing. This trend is commonly seen in youngsters. It is agreed that the popularity among youngsters is a positive development. Analysing both the ability to communicate at ease with friends and relatives as well as the acce...

Hi Kumar, Thank you very much for taking out the time to read my essay and commenting on it. Regarding your observations: The reason to choose 'Financial Strain' over 'Financial Burden' was that I already had used word 'burden' in introduction therefore was avoiding to repeat it. I agree that "...

Hi , Your essay seems to be very good ,with all the points covered. Below are the few things I observed. Financial strain--> Financial Burden Provision of free transportation services --> idea of free ...... Elimination of fare --> withdrawal of fare I feel this words might more fit rather than the ...

Hi Kumar If you allow me this correction, you must avoid using words such as "I strongly feel...or " It's up to the parents... Try and use " It is believed..."..and "As has been proven..." Keep it formal and back it with facts and data. Great essay though, better then ...

Hi Lulia, Full time university students spend most of time studying. They should be doing other activities too. To what extend do you agree or disagree? One thing i observed is you didn't try to give more examples. The only example you have taken is exercises and you gave your opinion more on exerci...

Essay topic – In some countries, grandparents play a significant role in bringing up children. Is this a positive or negative thing? I strongly feel that grandparents play a vital role both in families and even in bringing up the children. Grandparents are like strong pillars to any family. They ha...

Hi Ryan, I am taking IELTS General for migrating to Australia. I have tried for 5 times and was never able to score 7 in each. Below are my scores: Attempt1-->7.5(L),6(R),6.5(W),6.5(S) Attempt2--> 6(L),5.5(R),7(W),7(S) Attempt3--> 7(L),5.5(R),6(W),6(S) Attempt4--> 8(L),6(R),6(W),6.5(S) Attempt5--> ...

Hi Ryan, I am taking IELTS General for migrating to Australia. I have tried for 5 times and was never able to score 7 in each. Below are my scores: Attempt1-->7.5(L),6(R),6.5(W),6.5(S) Attempt2--> 6(L),5.5(R),7(W),7(S) Attempt3--> 7(L),5.5(R),6(W),6(S) Attempt4--> 8(L),6(R),6(W),6.5(S) Attempt5--> 8...

Hi All, I am kumar and i am taking IELTS exam to migrate to Australia. Very SAD... :( thing about me is i have attempted for 5 times and i was never able to score 7 in each band. I know that it's my mistake that every time i givemy exam without any minimal preparation .I am not trying do defend myse...