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Tourism is an excellent tool through which a country can develop. However, certain side effects of tourism can be harmful. How can countries curb the damaging effects of growing tourism industry. Tourism is nowadays counted among one of the top commerce industries forming a major source of revenue ...

Hi Kumar, I am not any expert in essay writing but I will try my best if I can give any useful input. Overall you essay is good and to me it looks the task is achieved. However, there are few things that I have noticed that may be revised like: In introduction you have started with "I strongly ...

Hi Kumar, Thank you very much for taking out the time to read my essay and commenting on it. Regarding your observations: The reason to choose 'Financial Strain' over 'Financial Burden' was that I already had used word 'burden' in introduction therefore was avoiding to repeat it. I agree that "...

Public transportation could be made free of charge. Are there more advantages or disadvantages to them? The availability of variety of fast moving transit options in modern times have enabled people to work and live in entirely different parts of the city thus increasing the importance of accessibi...

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Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Other thinks it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay Learning is a process unique to every individual. Different learning strategies work for different peop...