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by kylesun0513
Thu Oct 30, 2014 3:03 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: The Olympic Games
Replies: 0
Views: 537

The Olympic Games

Could anyone please check my essay and give me a band. Thank You. Some people say that the Olympic Games no longer have a role to play in the 21st century. To what extent do you agree or disagree? The Olympic Game is a historical athletic event contributing to human civilisation for hundreds of year...
by kylesun0513
Fri Sep 19, 2014 10:16 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Parents VS Friends, influences.
Replies: 1
Views: 2560

Parents VS Friends, influences.

Fourth post, some feedbacks will be appreciated Some people feel that youngsters get easily influenced by their friends rather than their parents. Do you agree or disagree. Parents undoubtedly play significant role in the lives of their children. However, many believe that along with children start...
by kylesun0513
Thu Sep 18, 2014 4:56 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: English as a global language
Replies: 0
Views: 6814

English as a global language

Question: The advantages brought by the spread of English as a “global language” will continue to outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? English, the worldwide spoken language, has been considered as one of essential skills with which global citizens need to be equippe...
by kylesun0513
Wed Sep 17, 2014 2:19 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please give your valuable feedback my exam is on Sept 20
Replies: 3
Views: 1141

Re: please give your valuable feedback my exam is on Sept 2

Alternative medicines has been available since many decades ago . It is believed that there are many use s still around the world. There is no strong evidence that proves they are dangerous for human health , thus I think both alternative and conventional medicines can be used. Conventional communit...
by kylesun0513
Wed Sep 17, 2014 1:30 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Air travel ( important )
Replies: 3
Views: 1555

Re: Air travel ( important )

It's a good essay to me. Well-structured with cohesion and coherence, a range of vocabularies, no obvious grammatical errors. I would consider this is an over band 7 sound essay.
by kylesun0513
Mon Sep 15, 2014 6:25 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: lower crime rate..(please leave your feedback)
Replies: 2
Views: 1416

Re: lower crime rate..(please leave your feedback)

Hi, at this stage I suggest you to limit your essay length to 270 to 280 words with 4 paragraphs... if you are getting band 6 means your grammar is good but may lack accuracy...by limiting word counts you reduce your mistakes too.... Thank you durai for the advice, it is very helpful. Just wonderin...
by kylesun0513
Mon Sep 15, 2014 6:22 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Being ambitious ( Essay type)
Replies: 0
Views: 8365

Being ambitious ( Essay type)

Before I started writing this essay, I was confused about whether this is a discussion or argument essay. I went through the question couple of times and I determined to write an argument structure. Can anyone please give me some advices, thank you so much. It is believed that everyone should have ...
by kylesun0513
Sun Sep 14, 2014 3:12 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: lower crime rate..(please leave your feedback)
Replies: 2
Views: 1416

lower crime rate..(please leave your feedback)

Question: Some people think to lower the crime rate, criminals should be given longer terms in prison. To what extent do you agree? The rising crime rate, one of the most sensitive issues, needs to be thoroughly dealt with by the government. In recent years, a voice is raised up among the general p...