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by subedi
Tue Nov 11, 2014 2:26 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Need study partner aiming 7 or higher skype.
Replies: 0
Views: 731

Need study partner aiming 7 or higher skype.

Hi, i am appearing for the IELTS test on 6th Dec 2014 so i am looking for dedicated study partners especially speaking practice partners. Please send me request in my skype id : nitrous.oxide4
by subedi
Tue Nov 04, 2014 12:25 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Focus too much on products and brands that they buy/use
Replies: 3
Views: 2286

Re: Focus too much on products and brands that they buy/use

topic: Some people focus too much on products and brands that they buy/use. Do you think this behavior has more advantages than disadvantages. “Shopping now has become easier than ever” experts say. But I feel shopping now has become more complicated than ever. Yes indeed, industrialization has left...
by subedi
Tue Nov 04, 2014 12:24 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Focus too much on products and brands that they buy/use
Replies: 3
Views: 2286

Re: Focus too much on products and brands that they buy/use

hi rakez i went through your essay. Your essay is very good. I dont know about your writing before but in this one you have definitely done better. The sentences are well structured and you have correctly answered your question. one suggestion i'd like to give to you is to write more simple sentence...
by subedi
Tue Nov 04, 2014 10:53 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: older/Younger employees Ac/Task-2
Replies: 2
Views: 906

Re: older/Younger employees Ac/Task-2

dear Bilak, after going through your essay i've found that you have met the requirements of answering your question but you have committed grammatical errors, which cannot be overlooked. Moreover, you should work more on the use of tense. for example in the second line of the second para By saying t...
by subedi
Tue Nov 04, 2014 10:13 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: men vs women
Replies: 0
Views: 390

men vs women

Women can do everything men can do and they do it better. They also can do many things men cannot. But there is a fact that their work is not appreciated as men’s although they have to sacrifice a lot for their family, and career. So someone said: “A woman’s place is in the home”. What do you think ...