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Very nice evolution by flick. Thank you very much. Can you suggest on the other factors of essay besides grammar. That will be a great help. You have done it in some of my essays.

Nice attempt. One suggestion is to take a position and support it fully. You only have spent one paragraph on your position. Secondly most of your writing is on defining other measures. You must give the proper balance to each section. Linking sentences are weak. Try to remember some linking words e...

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? Nowadays, increase in traffic and pollution is a pressing problem for many countries. It is evident as many c...

Your reply is good. Maybe you are getting a low score because of the difficult questions that you got in the exams and secondly you may be missing something in task 1 and getting a lower band in that category. Here is my reply. Some people say it is not necessary to travel to other places to learn a...

Some people say it is not necessary to travel to other places to learn about their cultures. We can learn just as much from books, films or internet. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Traditionally people travel around to know about the cultures of different societies. This can be seen in th...

Todays, online shopping is increasing at a rapid pace. This can be seen as billions of online transactions are happening on the daily basis. Despite many advantages of this trend, there are some disadvantages as well. Both advantages and disadvantages will be discussed in this essay. On the bright ...

Please review for grammar and give it a approximate band score.

Nowadays in many countries, Online shopping is replacing shopping at store. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? Todays, online shopping is increasing at a rapid pace. This can be seen as billions of online transactions are happening on the daily basis. Despite many advantages o...

Thank you very much flick. I have other posted many other writings as well. Please, if you have time, do check them.

I also consider this essay at 6 to 6.5 based upon the following criteria Task Response : Actually in your response you have given very little explanation on your experience and qualification as well as why are you interested in that company. The last paragraph is mostly irrelevant as it is not direc...

Please Check for grammar and others: Question: Do you agree or disagree. Research show that overeating is as harmful as smoking. Therefore, advertising of certain food products must be banned like smoking adverts Nowadays, new restaurants and food chains are becoming common and food business has bec...

Please check for grammar

Task response: Second ideas is not developed sufficiently. Overall progression is difficult to follow Cohesion and coherency: linker words are missing. Although proper paragraphing and transition words are used but other connective device are not used effectively. Lexical resource: Word choice is no...

Task Response: Position is not clear and task is sufficiently addressed. Coherency and Cohesion: Linking and cohesive devices are not used efficiently. Lexical Resource: Adequate vocabulary is used but some inappropriate word choices impede the message. Grammatical Range and accuracy: Small sentence...

Dear akram, I’m glad that you are looking to start a new business and want to take me in. Starting a software company which develops applications for mobile is a great idea. As so many people are using mobile phones there is a large market available to you. Mobile applications are becoming common as...

Dear sir or madam, I am writing this letter in response to your advertisement, published in the newspaper. I like to bring your attention to a manufacturing company in my neighborhood. This company is using processes which emit numerous gases. These gases are hazardous to the living beings around. C...

Dear sir or madam, I am writing this letter to bring in your attention a serious matter of misconduct by your staff. Last weekend, I booked a ticket to UAE for a conference on prevention from Ebola virus. At the airport, your staff was unable to verify my reservation. According to your staff, this w...

Nowadays, people usually search for those jobs which pay them a handsome amount of remuneration at the end of month. Very few people look into the added benefits, beside salary, in a job. It is argued that people should not consider the salary as the only deciding factor when selecting a job. This w...