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by devinp
Sun Dec 21, 2014 12:58 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2: Taking gap year
Replies: 2
Views: 666

Re: Task 2: Taking gap year

before they start par1 Nowadays, people began to value the real-life experience. They claim that students especially university graduates should take a gap year in order to acquire some experience before starting their professional career. In my opinion, it may be helpful for those who have no exper...
by devinp
Sun Dec 21, 2014 12:42 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls rate the essay! smoking is a bad habit
Replies: 5
Views: 4594

Re: pls rate the essay! smoking is a bad habit

this question asks your opinion on smoking......more effects oriented, not the causes... so you can make your essay but stating the negative effects and say they are so bad and that is why i agree smoking should be banned worldwide. you can say intro smoking serious topic for public health. smoking ...
by devinp
Sun Dec 21, 2014 12:34 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls rate the essay! smoking is a bad habit
Replies: 5
Views: 4594

Re: pls rate the essay! smoking is a bad habit

I rate 5.5 for you here is my revised version. When people mention the topic of smoking, they usually refer to some specific diseases such as lung cancer. Not only smokers are affected by this, it may also influence the surrounding people through passive smoking. In my opinion, the topic statement s...