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Great answer.

What I usually recommend is to quickly think in threes: three points (usually a main one and two subsidiary ideas), each with a pro and a con which you can discuss also in threes (point, counterpoint, conclusion).

It'd be 'to' and 'products', respectively

Well... there are quite a few mistakes. Don't give up and keep practising, but keep those aspects in mind: The world’s resources is divided... oil is the main resources that are being used with the people cooperation for preventing these issue keep going on. the government also need to control To ov...

Yes, spot on. My mistake

I wouldn't call it 'poor', it's just in the process of developing further. A version with some suggested modifications: The line graph compares the numbers of three separate types of crime, including burglary, car theft and robbery, which happened in Newport city center between 2003 and 2012. Overal...

Nice text, good word count (not too short and not too long) and quite logical. The reader can understand what you think and why you think that way. Some nitpicks: While it is being widely acknowledged that raising the price of fuel is the best way to conquer environmental issues If it's something th...

Hi! Clear idea, cohesive and good vocab, nice use of clear examples. Now, some nitpicks: Some spelling mistakes: to be intertained by the movies coming from overseas rather than locally produced ones. full of breand new scenes for the population of their country. isntead of waiting ... Singular vs p...

Hi! Nice text, your ideas are clear and you're good at supporting the reasons why you think the way you do. On the other hand, it's a bit long (400+ words). While going over the word limit is not penalised (as far as I know), 400 seems like way too much IMO. Anyway, time for some nitpicks: Today, it...

Hi! This is arguably one of the few places where my nitpicking's well received: The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003-2012. The line graph compares the numbers of three separate types of crime, including burglary, car the...

That seems like an interesting approach, indeed. I admit I've always been doing it the other way around with the people I coach, so perhaps I should try your suggestion next time.

That's great. Thank you for the info and hope you get your desired band.

Great episode. Congratulations on everything that’s happened this year and a big thank you for doing all of this. I really like your ideas (WhatsApp, Crowdfunding) and you can count on me. I may take you on your offer of doing some Podcasts and appreciate the help to spread the word. My life’s also ...

I wouldn't say they're glaring, since they don't really dilute the message (besides the wrong-word ones perhaps, but even then most people would know what you meant anyway), but obviously it's a lot better if you can address them before the test (and, nevermind the test, just for life itself). Your ...

Really good in general and well structured. Some nitpicks: Countrie s like Vietnam have been able to successfully make improvisations in its economy Plural vs singular disagreement, wrong word (it should be 'improvements'). most often than not Should be 'more'. It's a fixed expression. ... the money...

You address the topic quite well (although perhaps the bit about 'nurture' is slightly rushed in the end) and your vocabulary's great. Some nitpicks: However not until the completion of the Human Genome Project Missing comma after the adverb. ... the ... debate between molecular biologists and socio...

I think task achievement is good (you do address the question and explain your reasons) and the text itself is quite coherent. Good vocabulary and generally good grammar. There are some mistakes but those are just nitpicks, there's nothing that obstructs communication: towards the activities childre...

Hello everybody. I'd signed up a while ago but this is my first post. My main goal is to become an examiner, but of course I need some certified teaching experience (gradually getting there) and to score 9 (I was close ... 8.5 twice, but no rush). After living in South Wales for a while, I've recent...