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- Fri Mar 13, 2015 4:36 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Introduction Paragraph of Task 2 Essay
- Replies: 5
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Introduction Paragraph of Task 2 Essay
Hi All Please evaluate my introduction paragraph of Task 2 essay, I have used ( or rather tried to use) Ryan's strategy on Discussion Essay. Also help me improve on my grammar. Some people think that professional athletes make good role models for young people, while others believe they don’t. Discu...
- Tue Mar 10, 2015 12:22 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Writing task 2. Please help me assess
- Replies: 4
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Re: Writing task 2. Please help me assess
You should see Ryan's ielts videos, it will help. Also do not use "I" always use third person approach. Ryan talks about this.
For example instead of writing "I believe" you can write "it is generally believed". "we" is also discouraged in academic writing.
For example instead of writing "I believe" you can write "it is generally believed". "we" is also discouraged in academic writing.
- Tue Feb 24, 2015 5:46 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Will my essay style get me 7 ?
- Replies: 1
- Views: 980
Will my essay style get me 7 ?
Folks I am unable to reach 7.0 in my writing. Please review my essay and suggest few corrections. Am I off-topic ? Question ( taken from one of Ryan's utube tutorial ) The government should be permitted to censor internet to protect young people from offensive content. Do you agree or disagree ? For...