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by danyocean
Sat Mar 07, 2015 8:05 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2 _ please help me to assess this writing
Replies: 1
Views: 2043

Re: Writing task 2 _ please help me to assess this writing

Psychologist have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people health and capacity for work? A psycholog...
by danyocean
Sat Mar 07, 2015 7:18 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 1 - Line graph
Replies: 3
Views: 1004

Re: Writing Task 1 - Line graph

The line graph compares the figure for money spent on books by three different countries over a period of 10 years. It can be clearly seen that the figure for Germany remained at above all countries on spending money for books. Meanwhile, there is a dramatic increase in the Austria figures. In 1995...
by danyocean
Sat Mar 07, 2015 12:13 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task II
Replies: 2
Views: 1674

Re: Task II

These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development? Nowadays, more fathers choose to take in their children and remain at home, whilst mothers are responsible ...
by danyocean
Fri Mar 06, 2015 12:13 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2 - General
Replies: 2
Views: 11613

Re: Writing task 2 - General

"Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." The conflict between teenagers and parents increases as they move into adulthood. This...
by danyocean
Fri Mar 06, 2015 11:46 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing essay Task 2
Replies: 3
Views: 2490

Re: Please assess my writing essay Task 2

On the one hand, technology has a significant impact on relationships in business, education and social life. the word "relationships" shall be used to express relation between groups/people/countries. First of all, telephones and (the) internet allow business people to interact each other...
by danyocean
Fri Mar 06, 2015 11:16 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing essay Task 2
Replies: 3
Views: 2490

Re: Please access my writing essay Task 2

Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? Recently, advent of modern technology has changed the way that people interact wi...
by danyocean
Thu Mar 05, 2015 10:26 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 1 - Academic (Line Graph-money spent on books)
Replies: 2
Views: 6670

Re: Writing Task 1 - Academic (Line Graph-money spent on boo

The line graph compares the figure for money spent on books by three different countries over a period of 10 years. It can be clearly seen that the figure for Germany remained at above all countries on spending money for books. Meanwhile, there is a dramatic increase in the Austria figures. In 1995,...
by danyocean
Thu Mar 05, 2015 7:29 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: A study partner in Indonesia (East Java)
Replies: 1
Views: 996

A study partner in Indonesia (East Java)

Hi, I would like to study IELTS (writing and speaking) together with anyone in Indonesia, or other countries. Please contact me at dnyocean@gmail.com or my skype ID is "daniarsupriyadi".

We will practice 11 speaking skills, such as comparing, contrasting, describing things, etc.
by danyocean
Thu Mar 05, 2015 6:19 am
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: Speaking partner (11 speaking skill practices)
Replies: 2
Views: 8996

Speaking partner (11 speaking skill practices)

Great to virtually meet you. As you know, my name is Dany Ocean (especially on this forum), whereas my Skype ID is daniarsupriyadi . I really encourage to be your partner to conquer the IELTS Speaking. I would practice these following skills: Fluently Comparing and contrasting arguments Coherernce C...
by danyocean
Wed Mar 04, 2015 11:49 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: WR2-C6T1 - Popular consumer good (an Indonesian perspective)
Replies: 2
Views: 732

WR2-C6T1 - Popular consumer good (an Indonesian perspective)

Q: Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Nowadays, advertisement has been an essential part of every good as a sales promotion. It is often more associated wit...
by danyocean
Fri Feb 27, 2015 1:12 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can this essay score an 8?
Replies: 2
Views: 1505

Re: Task 2. Comments will be greatly appreciated. :)

Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to be meant for adults only. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes and what solutions can be offered? --- Child obesity is one alarming issue that every country is facing these days. Clearly,...
by danyocean
Fri Feb 27, 2015 12:14 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS Writting Task 2 , Kindly grade and identify errors
Replies: 3
Views: 1799

Re: IELTS Writting Task 2 , Kindly grade and identify errors

In many countries tourism is a major part of the economy, but it also causes environmental damage and ruins the places it exploits. It is argued that tourists should pay an additional tax to compensate for this damage. Another approaches In many countries, tourism business which is an integral part ...
by danyocean
Fri Feb 27, 2015 7:56 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Essay Committing Crime (Indonesia perspective)
Replies: 0
Views: 454

Essay Committing Crime (Indonesia perspective)

Greeting from Indonesia. Please help me up by giving feedback of these essay. I am wondering if anyone could show how to write a good sentence for IELTS. I appreciate and thanks to you. People continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it. Why do you think this happens? How can crime b...