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- Mon Mar 30, 2015 4:30 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Academic Task 1_I appreciate your time and advice very much.
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Re: Academic Task 1_I appreciate your time and advice very m
I am not an expert, but I have done all my best to assess your essay gaoyanjun. check my notes whether they are relevant or not if needed. Introduction is not bad but you should avoid using the same verb (show) as provided in the description. You may use synonyms of it(illustrate, represent, depict)...
- Sun Mar 29, 2015 3:04 am
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- Topic: academic writing task 1
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academic writing task 1
The charts overhead illustrate the main reasons for study among students of various age groups and the quantity of support they accepted from employers. The first graph demonstrates that, there were 80% of students who preferred to study for their careers, whereas for interest was only 10% among und...