Please correct and rate my GT letter.

[prathap]

You stayed at your friend house and forget to take watch. Write a letter to your friend
Thanks him/her
Describe the watch
Tell him how to return
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Dear Anusha,

I hope you have recovered from our memorable and fun days at your house and started concentrating on your final year exams.

I would like to take this opportunity to thank you and your mummy for providing a pleasant hosting during my recent trip to Bangalore. I would ever and never forget the delicious tasty food items served to me. Convey my special thanks to your mummy.

I forgot my watch at your home while i was in hurry to catch my flight. I think i kept it on the computer table at the room where i stayed. I have inherited that watch from my grandfather and have lot of sentimental attachment. Both the strap and front face of the watch is made up of gold and it is brand of "Titan".

It would be great if could send it to me through courier. I am happy to transfer courier charges to your account. I have enclosed my address details for your reference.

See you soon and all the best for your exams. Thank you once again !

Yours lovingly,
Archana

[Flick]

You stayed at your friend house and forget to take watch. Write a letter to your friend
Thanks him/her
Describe the watch
Tell him how to return
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Dear Anusha,

I hope you have recovered from our memorable and fun days at your house and started concentrating on your final year exams.

I would like to take this opportunity to thank you and your mother for being amazing hosts during my recent trip to Bangalore. I will never forget the delicious food served to me. Please convey my special thanks to your mother.

I forgot my watch at your home while I was in hurry to catch my flight. I think I kept it on the computer table in the room where I stayed. I inherited that watch from my grandfather and it has great sentimental value. Both the strap and face of the watch are made of gold and it is from the "Titan"brand.

It would be great if could send it to me through courier. I am happy to transfer courier charges to your account. I have enclosed my address details for your reference.

See you soon and all the best for your exams. Thank you once again!

Yours lovingly,
Archana

[prathap]

Thank you Very much.

Could you please grade it?