A person should change a career at least once for a lifetime

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rakez
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A person should change a career at least once for a lifetime

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Question:Some people think that a person should change a career at least once, while others think that it is better to stay in one job for a lifetime.Do you agree or disagree.

Answer:In the modern days, it is quite a common fact that people change their job frequently.Because of the rise of employment opportunities in private sector companies, there is huge demand for the professionals.It is argued that majority of the employees move to other jobs due to various factors which enforces them to do so.The discussable points are firstly to achieve their personal and professional growth as well as to break their routine work culture in official activities, employees prefer to change their jobs.

Employees dream about their career to be increased form strength to strength. Hence in the need of fulfilling their goal, undergo the process of learning new skills and techniques for betterment of future.Considering an example,one of my friend had changed his job in couple of years as he was not able to achieve his professional dreams and desired work culture.The employees are also not hesitating to change the job if there are offered higher designation with hike in salary.After analyzing, professional growth is one of the reason for job change.

On the other hand , employees prefer to change their job ,In order to break the monotony nature in the work atmosphere . For example , if the a typist in a company is bored with his daily routine work.Therefore,this boringness nature and monotony of the work will lead to search of a new job for the uplift of the career and as well the increase of financial status.Hence after analyzing the regularity and unexcitement in their work life is the cause for the job change.

To summarize, it is clear that to achieve personal,professional growth and routine nature are the main causes responsible employee’s job change.Thus ,in the future ,it can be expected that thses percentage of employment change will be likely to increase.
rakez
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Re: A person should change a career at least once for a life

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Hi everyone, please comment on my essay.I require 7 band score.Please comment on mistakes and provide your feedback.What can be the bandscore for this essay?
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