Kate_ wrote:Hi, this is the latest ielts writing topic: many people now choose to be unemployed instead of being employed the jobs they dont like. Agree or not?
Please have a comment on my following points:
I disagree because:
1. World economy unstability => no choice in work. If you have job, you're lucky.
2. Unemployment causes negative effects to society such as financial burden, crimes
I'm quite confused now
I tend to make two agreement statements and 2 disagreement statements, currently.
So, for exam I would write a 4 paragraph essay.
1. Paragraph 1 = Introduction
2. Paragraph 2 = Agree because a. Some people have enough money. b. They are hoping for a better job.
3. Paragraph 3 = Disagree because a. Many people need a job. b. They are not sure if they will get a better one.
4. Conclusion
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