Academic writing task 2

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Dmitriy
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Academic writing task 2

Post by Dmitriy »

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning foreing languages at primary school rather that secondary school. Do the advantages outweight the disadvantages?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge and experience.




In today fast moving world, children have to know two or more foreign languages. It is believed that is better to begin learning foreign lenguages in primary schools. This will have an effect in child future career and it helps in communication with people.

First of all parent want their kids to be smart and well educated. Many of them hiring tutors to teach their children. It is proved that this is the best way to educate your child. Thus, children have to be taught foreign languages from the youth.

Moreover, young age is the best time to learn foreign languages because in this period, kids have perfect memory and it is much easier to memorise new words and rules. Starting from 7 years old child have to start learn foreign languages. Also even before this age, parents could read fairy tales for their children. It is proved by many experts in study area.

As a result, in adultery become much easier further studying of foreign languages. Parents ought to pay more attention to childrens education.
Veena2015
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Re: Academic writing task 2

Post by Veena2015 »

It was 176 words only and just a friendly reminder that the repetitive words are not considered.

From my perspective,
1. chance of loosing marks because the essay words are under the required words.

2. You have valid points but lacking cohesion and coherence.
3. Best way to practice is to look into band 8 and 9 essays from various IELTS help sites.

Good luck with your exams
Dmitriy
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Joined: Thu Dec 11, 2014 10:33 am

Re: Academic writing task 2

Post by Dmitriy »

Veena2015 wrote:It was 176 words only and just a friendly reminder that the repetitive words are not considered.

From my perspective,
1. chance of loosing marks because the essay words are under the required words.

2. You have valid points but lacking cohesion and coherence.
3. Best way to practice is to look into band 8 and 9 essays from various IELTS help sites.

Good luck with your exams
Luckily I have two month for practicing. Thanks for your answer.
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