Please review my Writing Task 2

[sriam255]

With the advent of computers the role of teachers are going to be faded in classrooms. Agree or Disagree?

Now a days, it is a common debate among teachers and parents on how far can one allow the computers to educate childrens in schools. It is no doubt a very important tool and an effective way to impart education to a pupil. But, it is completely disagreed and not possible that computers can take over a place of a teacher in immediate future. Analyzing the limitations of computers as well as advantages of a teachers over computers will prove this.

First of all, it is possible that computer might be able to conduct a class but there is no guarantee that computers would be able to handle and maintain a classroom. For instance, it might be difficult to restrain, discipline and control students in the class. There will also be a question on communication and understanding between a student and a computer machine. Thus, from the above theory, it is ample clear that computers can never replace a teacher.

Second of all, computers are helpful working in administrative sections of school. However, there are some serious concern on how a computer would be able to look into special needs and requirements of individual students. For example, some students needs motivation, help and extra support before or after schooling hours. So, how can a computer would be able to provide that. While a teacher can provide a special human touch and study a child's psychology and work accordingly. Only a teacher can understand a student special skills and talent and help them in nurturing and bringing out their best on public platform. As a result, it is very clear that a teacher always has a human edge over a computer and its related technologies.

Finally, it is proven that computers can never take away the role of a teachers. In future, It is predicted that both teachers and computers might work side by side and help each other in teaching and evaluations of students performance.

[sriam255]

Someone, please review it and let me know where i need to improve

[Flick]

With the advent of computers the role of teachers are going to be faded in classrooms. Agree or Disagree?

Nowadays, it is a common debate among teachers and parents on how far can one allow computers to educate children in school. It is no doubt a very important tool and an effective way to impart education to a pupil. But, it is completely disagreed and not possible that computers can take the place of a teacher in the immediate future. Analyzing the limitations of computers as well as the advantages of teachers over computers will prove this.

First of all, it is possible that computers might be able to conduct a class, but there is no guarantee that computers would be able to handle and maintain a classroom. For instance, it might be difficult to restrain, discipline and control students in the class. There will also be a question of communication and understanding between a student and a computer. Thus, it is amply clear that computers can never replace teachers.

Second of all, computers are helpful working in administrative sections of school. However, there are some serious concerns on how a computer would be able to look into special needs and requirements of individual students. For example, some students need motivation, help and extra support before or after schooling hours. So, how can a computer be able to provide that? Meanwhile, a teacher can provide a special human touch and study a child's psychology and work accordingly. Only a teacher can understand a student's special skills and talent and help them in nurturing and bringing out their best. As a result, it is very clear that a teacher always has a human edge over a computer and its related technologies.

Finally, it is proven that computers can never take away the role of teachers. In future, It is predicted that both teachers and computers will work side by side and help each other in teaching and evaluations of student performance.