Writing task 1-Please guide me towards Band 7

[Kerry Faith]

The bar graph shows information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010. It also compares the educational level of the same population in two different years; 2002 and 2010.

It is illustrated in the first graph that computer ownership has been gradually increasing since 2002. Since 2002 it increased from 55% to 65% in 2010. 

The second graph shows how computer ownership affects the educational attainment of the population. It is observed that since the introduction of computer in 2002, the number of people with no high school diploma doubled in number.The same is true with the number of college dropouts. On the other hand, significant increase has been observed in the number of people who completed high school, college and post graduate studies. 

]In conclusion, it is safe to say that computer ownership does not directly affect whether or not an individual can finish school.




FOR THE GRAPH PLEASE GO TO : http://takeielts.britishcouncil.org/sit ... stions.pdf

[Kerry Faith]

http://takeielts.britishcouncil.org/sit ... stions.pdf


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