[Writing task 1] Please check my essay.
[Writing task 1] Please check my essay.
The graph provides information on the increases in traffic in the Netherlands from 1950 to 2010. Overall, it can be seen that car traffic was an upward trend; it had increased significantly since 1950, while other types of transportation had a little improvement.
In 1950, all types of traffic started off at the same point (0%). Car traffic gradually rose to 20% in 1960, while the others slightly moved up to around 15%, except for other public transportation that rose up only 4%. After that, between 1960 and 2010, there was a significant increase in car traffic when it went up to over 130% in 2010. This made a huge difference between car traffic and the other kinds of transportation, which they had a slight similar pattern. During this time, in 1970, train and bicycle traffic went up to about 15% and 13% respectively, and they increased moderately over the next 30 years. However, other public transportation had remained steady between 1960 and 1970, and then slightly increased from 3% to 16% in 2010.