Hi All, i am a newbie to this site and have IELTS exam in a month. right now, i am preparing for General Training Task 2 and below is my first shot at it. Wondering if someone here can help me reviewing this Introduction. Thank you.
Topic:
Increasingly, the western world has been outsourcing its labour-related jobs to cheaper alternatives available in less-developed countries. Although this creates opportunities for people in poorer nations, it is a policy that is criticized by many in the west. Write an essay response supporting the case for the outsourcing of labour related jobs.
My Answer (Intro only as of now)
There is a growing phenomenon of western countries out-sourcing labour-related work to developing countries for monetary benefits. This receives lot of criticism in the west, even though it creates many job-opportunities in poorer nations. I support this policy by considering the cost advantage that western countries get as well as the possibilities it creates for the poorer countries to become developed.