[Table] Report 1 Cambridge IELTS 4 Test 1

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[Table] Report 1 Cambridge IELTS 4 Test 1

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The table compares the percentages of Australian people living in poverty in the year 1999.

It is observed that the least proportion of poverty rates is experienced by dwellers who are grouped into the aged couple family, while the significant percentages of which saw in the figure for the sole parent.

In 1999, 11% of people in Australia living in poverty, and the highest poverty rates was in the sole parent people (21%), while just under 5 percent of the aged couple only suffer poorness. While other households figures were a noticeably different in numbers ranging from 6% to 19% in the figure for single aged person and single without any children, respectively. Also, the rates of a couple with no children were slightly less than the ratios of single aged person, with only one percent differences.

Furthermore, 19% or 359,000 individuals who belong to a single-no-children class suffered such distress conditions. Although that figures are much higher than in the rates of the couple with children, with only 12% or approximately 900 thousand of people.
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