Punishment - Task 2 plz evaluate.

[shabam]

Example to Task 2 in writing test , about children punishment and my opinion.

Thanks,




The difference between right and wrong is clear for adults, may be to some extent, unlike childhood stage in which a correction by parents or teachers is required. The correction includes advices or punishment as a part of behavioral direction towards correct actions.


If we took the punishment part, we should know how to utilize it with maximum benefits to children not to harm them. Children don’t know the result of their actions whether those actions are right or wrong . It is parent’s responsibilities to guide them softly and hardly.


The hard part includes the punishment. In low educated areas, physical punishment is being used. This type of punishment considered as a sort of violence towards the child and has a great impact on his or her personality, thinking and life quality.

On other hand, In well educated society , punishment has different ways like preventing the child from playing with friends, watching TV or buying his favorite sweets. This type of punishment should be translated by the child to : I am not allowed to buy sweet because I haven’t finished my homework or duties as an example.

This sort of punishment is good and considered a proper way to treat the undesired behavior of children either in home or school. Further more, there should be a cooperation between both school and home to manage different types of punishment used.


I believe from my own experience that properly utilized psychological punishment to children is better than physical punishment which is not accepted at all.

In conclusion, there is always be a correct and incorrect actions by children. Punishment is one tool to teach the children the difference between the correct and incorrect behaviors. This tool has a great impact positively or negatively on child behavior and thinking, so it is your responsibility as a parent or teacher when you use this tool.

[shamkarne]

Vary nice writing .
My exam is on 23rd July
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[Flick]

Example to Task 2 in writing test , about children punishment and my opinion.

Thanks,




The difference between right and wrong is clear for adults, unlike during childhood, when a correction by parents or teachers is required. The correction includes advice or punishment to help children understand right and wrong.


If we consider the punishment part, we should know how to utilize it with maximum benefits to children without harming them. Children don’t know the result of their actions; whether those actions are right or wrong. It is the parents' responsibility to guide them softly and strongly.


The strong part includes punishment. In poorly educated areas, physical punishment is often used. This type of punishment is considered as a sort of violence towards the child and has a great impact on his or her personality, thinking and life quality.

On other hand, In well educated society, various methods of punishment are used, like preventing the child from playing with friends, watching TV or buying his favorite sweets. This type of punishment should be translated by the child to, 'I am not allowed to buy sweet because I haven’t finished my homework or duties' for example.

This sort of punishment is effective and considered a proper way to treat the undesired behavior of children either in home or school. Furthermore, there should be a cooperation between both school and home to manage different types of punishment.


I believe from my own experience that properly utilized psychological punishment is better than physical punishment, which is not acceptable at all.

In conclusion, there will always be correct and incorrect actions by children. Punishment is one tool to teach children the difference between the correct and incorrect behaviors. This tool has a great impact positively or negatively on child behavior and thinking, so it is your responsibility as a parent or teacher when you use this tool.