Pls comment on Task 2 Essay (GT- IETLS)

[Sonika Phaugat]

Write about the following topic: In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with their old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes
the government has to pay for this care.

Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from
your own knowledge or experience.


Write at least 250 words
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The Essay is as written below , Please comment
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In a country like Britain , wherein the government is already taking care of the citizens by providing cutting edge technology and state of art infrastructure , I believe it is every citizen’s responsibility to cater for their old age by themselves .
Firstly , there are currently numerous facilities already provided by the government which are free of cost , Like say NHS , which is a government organization providing free medical care to all its citizens and eligible immigrants . The government also provides free education to all the children up-till year 12 and provides social security to everyone.
Secondly , the government’s major funds should always be focused towards progressing the country’s economy . It is not advisable to move funds from other organizations like security , Industries etc to the care department .
Thirdly , a person’s financial state should always be his own responsibility which he should focus on much earlier in his life rather than relying on either the government or his children . Financial Independence should always be taught in school and individual’s should be groomed such that they are not a burden on either the government or family
In conclusion , I would suggest that the decision of staying at home or in a care should be taken by an individual well in-advance and he should plan his finances accordingly . It is neither sensible nor advisable to place these golden years of your life at someone else’s mercy .

[Flick]

Write about the following topic: In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with their old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes
the government has to pay for this care.

Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from
your own knowledge or experience.


Write at least 250 words
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The Essay is as written below , Please comment
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In a country like Britain, wherein the government is already taking care of the citizens by providing cutting edge technology and state of art infrastructure, I believe it is every citizen’s responsibility to cater for their old age by themselves.

Firstly, there are currently numerous facilities already provided by the government which are free of cost, for example the NHS, which is a government organization providing free medical care to all its citizens and eligible immigrants. The government also provides free education to all the children up until year 12 and provides social security to everyone.

Secondly, the government’s major funds should always be focused towards progressing the country’s economy. It is not advisable to move funds from other organizations like security, etc to the care department.

Thirdly, a person’s financial state should always be his own responsibility and he should focus on it much earlier in his life rather than relying on either the government or his children. Financial independence should always be taught in school and individuals should be groomed such that they are not a burden on either the government or family.

In conclusion, I would suggest that the decision of staying at home or in a care facility should be taken by an individual well in advance and he should plan his finances accordingly. It is neither sensible nor advisable to place these golden years of your life at someone else’s mercy.