Writing task 2 - need evaluation

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faty
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Writing task 2 - need evaluation

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In most developed countries, the average life expectancy is constantly increasing, discuss the positive and negative aspects of this trend.

Longevity in recent era is nowadays one of the highlighted issues. This is due to the fact that demographic figures have changed tremendously in recent years. While there are numerous advantages of increased life expectancy, it has brought along various problems. This will be proven by analyzing both points of view prior to reaching an informed conclusion.

If positive attributes are to be evaluated, longevity tends to play a vital role in forming an intelligent society.In most parts of the world, England in particular, taking advice from the old people in business-related issues is common culture. This is due to the fact that these people have developed a perception of associating wisdom with the elderly. To illustrate it more clearly, people around the globe have agreed that spending more years will help to experience traits that can be taught to young generation for making germane decisions.

From another perception, long life can have several disadvantages. The most painful aspect is the generation gap. Old people are very likely to show a resistance with the modern attributes of life. This is because they are more adapted to conventional way of living and are unwilling to change. Possible results for this attitude are seclusion and illness in the growing age. This is also proven in the survey conducted in the old-age home in Newyork where most of the old people think that they are not beneficial for the society anymore.

After hashing out the pros and cons of longevity, it is clear that the increased statistics of average life will continue to impact the society in both, positive and negative ways. In the years to come forth, it may be perceived that these statistics would be keenly observed to evaluate behavioral attributes of different kind of societies.
faty
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Re: Writing task 2 - need evaluation

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need evaluation please.
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