Writing task 1- Rainfall and minimum and maximum temperatures in London

[MissIvy]

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The table presents rainfall and minimum and maximum temperatures in London in 2007. While the minimum and maximum temperatures data move in a similar fashion, the rainfall data shows unstable figures throughout the year.

The maximum and minimum average daily temperatures hit their peaks during the midyear months and bottomed at the beginning and the end of the year months. The average maximum daily temperature gradually climbed from 6°c in January to 22°c in July. Then it slowly dropped back to 6°c in December. The minimum average daily temperature appears in a parallel pattern. It started at its lowest temperature, 2°c, in January then consistently swelled to 12°c in July. Then it gradually fell back to 3°c in December.
The rainfall figures jumped back and forth erratically with its peak at 65mm in November and bottomed at 38mm in both March and April. There appears to be an uncorrelated relationship between the temperatures data and the rainfall records.

[Flick]

The table represents rainfall and minimum and maximum temperatures in London in 2007. While the minimum and maximum temperatures data move in a similar fashion, the rainfall data shows unstable figures throughout the year.

The maximum and minimum average daily temperatures hit their peaks during the midyear months and bottomed out during the months at the end of the year. The average maximum daily temperature gradually climbed from 6°C in January to 22°C in July. Then it slowly dropped back to 6°C in December. The minimum average daily temperature appears in a parallel pattern. It started at its lowest temperature, 2°C, in January then consistently swelled to 12°C in July. It gradually fell back to 3°C in December.

The rainfall figures jumped back and forth erratically, with the peak at 65mm in November and the lowest levels of 38mm in both March and April. There appears to be an uncorrelated relationship between the temperature data and the rainfall records.