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[Mohammed]

Question:The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web.

The graph shows how many users visited two music sites called Music Choice and Pop Parade over a period of 15-day.

The initial impression from the graph is that Pop Parade was used by more people than Music Choice during this time, excluding 12th and 13th days. It is also noticeable that the number of visitors of both sites fluctuates in the given period.

Looking more closely at the graph, it can be seen that on the first day Pop Parade had significantly more users with 120.000, while Music Choice was visited only by 40.000 people. After that the number of users of Pop Parade decreased to a minimum of nearly 30.000 on the 7th day visitors which is similar to those internet users who prefer Music Choice with about 25.00 people.

Later on, however, people’s interest towards Pop Parade began to increase dramatically until 12th day where the number of users decreased to 80.000. Conversely, the number of users of this site rose to a peak of roughly 165.000 on the 15th day. By contrast, the number of people who visited Music Choice diminished by approximately 50.000 people and stood at close to 70.000 on the final day.