Topic - How important is dress code in our lives? Do you consider that dressing appropriately is important or are you of the opinion that everyone should be able to wear exactly what they like?
Answer -
Dress code is very esential in our socity. because of that we able to distingvish between profetions.
first of all,dressing convins about human neture and atitud,some attire represent cultures as well as society.Second of all,because of dress code we can not diffrenttiet profetion like police man,militri,buissness man,also college student etc. Furthermore, people chosen their cloths acording to their intrest wich type of fassion they consider.for instens,mostly people inspire from movies,telivission,culturs,tredition.for example, India is divers country in that many typs of culture and tredition is here and it has different type of attier for that reson i believe dresses represwnts our country.
It is not possible for every persoin to were what they like, for this there are many resones.deu to finantial condition,fro example poor people,some people like to wear casuale in their work place but thay can not, in that case they are alow to ware one day of week.Fro instens, in some cultur wpmen not alloud to weare that thy like.
To sum up,in my openion cloths is important in our lives,many types of dressing code in our society make gret cultur
easy on task 2.I wrote as how i wrote on note book. Please help me out to get band scour 7.
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Re: easy on task 2.I wrote as how i wrote on note book. Please help me out to get band scour 7.
Hi Brijesh,
Let's start with brutal honesty. The title of the post contains spelling errors - essay and score. Not a great sign if you're aiming for band 7. The spelling mistakes - and there are a LOT of them - continue through out the essay, sometimes making it difficult to understand.
The introduction and conclusions are very short, but that is less important than the fact that the main paragraphs are also short.
You say that because of dress codes we CANNOT distinguish between people doing different jobs. Is that really true? I mean, the military in particular is known for wearing uniforms.
Overall, this essay needs a lot of work.
All the best,
David
Let's start with brutal honesty. The title of the post contains spelling errors - essay and score. Not a great sign if you're aiming for band 7. The spelling mistakes - and there are a LOT of them - continue through out the essay, sometimes making it difficult to understand.
The introduction and conclusions are very short, but that is less important than the fact that the main paragraphs are also short.
You say that because of dress codes we CANNOT distinguish between people doing different jobs. Is that really true? I mean, the military in particular is known for wearing uniforms.
Overall, this essay needs a lot of work.
All the best,
David