PLEASE KINDLY ASSESS MY REPORT - TASK 1 - PIE CHART ONLINE RETAIL

[hollanda]

The given pie charts compare four different online retail items, including travel, film/ music, books and clothes in terms of revenue in New Zealand in the year 2003 and 2013.
Overall, sales for each sectors varied through the two year surveyed. In addition, travel and film/ music were among the most prominent sectors in both two years.
In 2003, travel was the greatest earner among four sectors, accounting for 36%, while the figure for 2013 was lower, at 29%. By contrast, film/ music contributed 33% to the total online sales in 2013. In comparison, there was only 21% of that in 2003.
Nearly a quarter of the total online turnover in the year 2003 was from clothes. This figure for 2013 was 16%, which was also the lowest percentage of sales in this year. In addition, there was a slight increase of 3% in book sales between 2003 (19%) and 2013 (22%).

[David.IELTS.Examiner]

Hi Hollanda,
We need a picture of the charts for this.
David

[hollanda]

I'm sorry but I don't know why I cannot attach the photo. Is there any limitation for the photo's size?

[irma]

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[irma]

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[irma]

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[irma]

The three bar charts compare the revenues generated through three different export categories in the year 2000,the current year and its predictive values in 2025.

Overall,it is immediately apparent that the international tourism and dairy products have been remain much more popular than meat products in the export industry of Southland . Moreover, the trend is predicted to remain the same in the future.

In the year 2000, international tourism made largest export that is 8 £billion.Whereas,the next two categories are of dairy products and meat products in the same year accounting for 7 £billion and 6£billion respectively .In the current year ,figures for dairy products shoot up astonishingly by 3£billion and also overtook the international tourism figures by difference of more than a billion pound.Thus, making it the highest sold product that is 10£billion of that year and values equals the international tourism expected in 2025.

International tourism steadily increase by the rise 1£billion in 2015 and 2025 .While,in contrast to international tourism ,meat products gradually fall over the 25 year period,with the decreasing rate of 0.5£billions .Its lowest export is likely to be 4£billions in 2025 .

In 2025,experts predicted almost the same pattern with some variations.It is estimated that foreign tourism would be the most popular,hitting to 10£billion.Whereas, dairy products will fall slightly to 9.5£billion.

To conclude,the lowest export is of meat products and largest sales is of imternational tourism(in 2025)and dairy products (in 2015)

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[irma]

How can we post it to ielts examiner.

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