Please kindly asses my speaking

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rinriera
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Please kindly asses my speaking

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Talk about a subject you are studying
What subject are you studying,
What is the subject about,
How do you feel about it,
and explain why are you interested in it.
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Re: Please kindly asses my speaking

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Hello, rinriera!

Thanks for sharing your recording about your favorite subject! It sounds like you really are into (really like) science! 
First, you are quite fluent. Your speaking speed is good, and your pronunciation is good, overall. I would encourage you to work on linking your words together more and on saying the /th/ sound correctly. Right now, your /th/ sounds sound like /d/. Here is a link to help with linking sounds and words together:
http://pronuncian.com/Linking/
You directly answered all of the questions and provided good details in your answer. Your speech was coherent and organized. I would encourage you to add some transitional words and phrases like “additionally” or “first” to help your ideas connect more clearly.
You have a good command of vocabulary, as you demonstrated when you said “applicable.” Keep working on building your vocabulary.
Grammar could use a bit of work. You regularly made subject / verb agreement mistakes. Here are some grammar notes:

The teachers explains clearly - EXPLAIN
Classmates is also good –Classmates ARE
All of them is actually quite fun – All of them ARE
Most of my majors I’m interested in is science - ARE
You can know the reasons about it - you can learn the reasons for it

Best wishes as you continue to practice!
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