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[DJvj]

Topic:-

Beside a lot of advantages, some people believe that the Internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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With the evolution of internet, nowadays information is being easily available and accessible for everyone. However, with the ease it provides to an individual it even brings some challenges if not used appropriately.

Nowadays, most of students get an exposure to internet at an early age be it in the school or at home. There are likely chances they may access the information which is prohibited for them like watching videos which can produce a direct impact on their studies. Another reason, generally people glued on it for prolong like staying connected on the social networking which would be a health hazard like increase in the eye sight at early age, getting frequent headaches, obesity due to less physical movement.

With the evolution of e-commerce, people do shopping online and access their bank accounts frequently. However, sometimes it makes the personal information more vulnerable for others to view and easy for hackers to hack the accounts if not used through a secure link and eventually invites cyber-crime. There are lots of online frauds happens with the online as it is very difficult to find the source is a trustworthy or not as there is no physical presence for it. For e.g. transferring money from one account to another and by mistake if the destination account is wrongly entered then difficult to recover the money.

I believe there are more pros than cons of using internet provided one uses it more judiciously and effectively. It can be used as source of information which could help in learning new things and be updated with the latest happening around the world.

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Appreciate your feedback.

[David.IELTS.Examiner]

Hello!

Overall, some good ideas, but I think that - particularly if your conclusion is that the benefits outweigh the problems - you should say how the problems can be reduced. Are these problems really internet issues or those of some people using the internet?

All the best,
David