Writing Task 2 / The existence of music

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Emre_Akdeniz
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Writing Task 2 / The existence of music

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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music ? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays ?



At the present day the music is one of the constituents of the life style. There is no doubt that the variety of music enrich the human life integrally. It is argued that some peple have susceptibility with music selections between traditional and actual. This will be shown by taking in to account all the facts/factors and evidences given below.


Firstly, the beings of sort of music indicate that people have colourful lives and remarkable pleasures. Moreover, the music is a way for how people to express themselves conveniently to the world. Whole memory and the favourable stories of the nations are carried to successive generations by music. And that is why, the music is more memorable and vivid than prose and poem, it is going on existing significantly.


Secondly, some people argue that the traditional music is relatively more crucial than the popular music as well. Thus, many residents advocate that it is utmostly needfull to keep cultural sounds. Whereas, the listeners might select to hear the alternative music types diurnally, according to their moods and manners and musical choices could be changeable in order to humans range of ages. Finally, it is evidently seen that the musical selections depend on more than one reason and signs the variety of human creativity.


After analyzing the areas of music and listener participations, it might be said that music is a component of living and it has to be so. In addition, variety and diversity of music creation indicate the wealth of human soul.
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Re: Writing Task 2 / The existence of music

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Hi David...appreciate your help to point out my mistakes...Anoop

From the dawn of time,music has been traditionally practiced widely across the globe in all culture and human races. It is a fact that the variety of melodies liked and practiced from one country to another is never ending. In this essay we will first look at why we require music in the first place and then try to analyse the significance of traditional music over international music.

Firstly, it will be fair to say that the day to day pressure on human kind is increasing day by day, be it family or work. Listening to music is not only a way to calm your mind but also helpful to reorganize thoughts and thinking. It has been scientifically proven that music has healing and relaxing capabilities. For example, soothing instrumental music played while doing yoga can considerably bring down pressure level. Thus, music has an important role to play in our well-being.

Secondly, It has been often debated that the international music is more relevant than the traditional music. Music like our mankind has evolved over time and the current international music has always seen to have some link to the traditional music. For example, many instruments like the violin has been used in traditional music dating back to before Christ era. In recent times, international music has used latest technologies to refine the traditional music in turn making it even more popular. Therefore, traditional music will always have its unique positioning and its importance should never be oversighted.

From the above discussions it is clear without an aorta of doubt that the music is here to stay forever. It is also predicted that music will not only have many advanced applications to enhance our standard of living but also continue to evolve with time.
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