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Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting.
Write an essay expressing your point of view.
Give reasons for your answers and provide relevant example and experience you might have.

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Parenthood is one of the important phases of human life. Some people consider that women can effectively raise the children compared to men. However, others think it other way around and below are the analysis for the same.

In the modern world, one of the biggest challenges in raising the children especially in a scenario where couple is working. However, it becomes more effective for a woman to raise the child as they are considered to be patient compared to man. Being affectionate and warmth in nature, It even makes the children more comfortable to express their thoughts. For e.g. if a child is hungry especially a new born then they will approach his/her mother first. On the other side, men are being considered to be the bread winner of the family. They go to work and earn so that they can look after the family and fulfill the required needs. For instance, if a child needs a toy then he/she would certainly approach his/her father to buy one.

I believe it’s an equal responsibility of both of them as parents to raise their children. However, mother plays an instrumental role in raising the child, right from the birth until the child stands on his/her feet and is irreplaceable. The relationship between mother and a child is boundless.

To conclude, no matter who takes the responsibility of raising the child ,the important thing which every parent has to be keep in mind that any activities would have a direct impact on the child’s upbringing as they are fresh bud and reshaped in anyway.
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