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DJvj
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Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?
Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.


Nowadays food preparation is the biggest challenge for the people due to the hectic schedules and various other commitments. However, this has improved the lifestyle of the people to an extent.

One of the biggest challenges in front of the people especially when couple is working is preparation of the food due to the unavailability of the time. However, various options like ready to eat, frozen food, online food ordering really helps so that they can focus on other commitments and spend time together with family. For e.g. a student who studies late in night and finds it difficult to suppress his hunger pangs. In those cases, instant food like maggi is a viable option with less preparation time and he/she can focus on the studies.

I believe nowadays the accessibility of the information for the food preparation is easily available. Someone can learn and experiment his culinary skills by watching videos online. However, relying on the outside food all time may pose some health hazard too. They can’t be used as a substitute for food as they don’t have the adequate amount of nutritional values what you get from a food. For e.g. in 2015, there was a lead substance found out in Maggi which was above the standard and could be a potentially health hazard for the human. Therefore, it was completely banned in India for a while.

To conclude, with the evolution of the technology has saved a significant amount of time and ease up the food preparation ways so that people can effective use the time in doing other committed work.

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Re: Please review Task 2 for GT and rate.

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DJvj wrote:Topic :-

Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?
Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.


Nowadays, food preparation is the biggest challenge for people due to hectic schedules and various other commitments. However, this has improved the lifestyle of people to an extent.

One of the biggest challenges people face, especially working couples, is food preparation due to the unavailability of time. However, various options like ready to eat, frozen food, and online food ordering really helps so that they can focus on other commitments and spend time together with family. For example, a student who studies late at night and finds it difficult to suppress his hunger pangs can keep instant food like noodles on hand as a quick and easy meal so he can focus on his studies.

I believe nowadays the accessibility of information for food preparation has made life easier. Someone can learn and improve his culinary skills by watching videos online. However, relying on outside food all time may pose some health hazards, too. They can’t be used as a substitute for food as they don’t have the adequate amount of nutritional value that you get from home-cookedfood. For example, in 2015, there was a lead substance discovered in Maggi (<--Maggi is a brand, not a type of food.) which was above the standard and could potentially be a health hazard for people. Therefore, it was completely banned in India for a while.

To conclude, the evolution of technology has saved a significant amount of time and made food preparation much easier, so people can use the time in doing other things.

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