Being a parent is a responsible role; some people think it is good if schools teach how to be a good parent from young age, while others think it is not necessary in young age. I agree, on the statement, that everyone going to be a parent one day and guiding the skills and qualities from young age would help people in future. If a person knows what are the responsibilities and how to handle certain parental situations before becoming a parent it would be a great advantage and even it helps to decide whether to become a parent or not. To be a good parent, several skills and qualities are need to be learned.
Taking responsibility is one of the key quality; that help to be responsible for their, and their kids actions. For example, at initial, the men and women need to take responsible when they decide to have a baby, after and until the baby grow to adult both parent need to take responsibility for their child’s actions.
Being lovable and giving love is a very important quality that a parent need. As it is every humans nature to seek love and in different ages the expectation of love changes. A child needs its mother and father's love very importantly, especially until the child become and adult, hence to this a parent need to know what kind of caring and love should be expressed at several stages of their child's life.
In current commercialized environment, it is necessary a person to earn enough to accomplish his or her children’s needs. Nowadays earning capacity of the parent decides the child’s future. It is practically understandable that different earning groups future is depends on it.
In conclusion, it is necessary every person to know how to be a good parent and make the decisions accordingly. Schools are taking a vital part in persons early age and it can provide a better understanding for them.
2016-05-07 Schools teach how to be a good parent
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Re: 2016-05-07 Schools teach how to be a good parent
Hello!
Every regular reader of my essay assessments knows that I'm going to tell you that your introduction is too long! It's as long as two main paragraphs!
Why do parents need to take responsibility for their children's actions?
What exactly do yuo mean by 'love'? Some peopel think it means supporting their children whatever they do, so does that fit with 'responsibility'?
Grammar and vocabulary are good, but you haven't explained your ideas fully.
All the best,
David
Every regular reader of my essay assessments knows that I'm going to tell you that your introduction is too long! It's as long as two main paragraphs!
Why do parents need to take responsibility for their children's actions?
What exactly do yuo mean by 'love'? Some peopel think it means supporting their children whatever they do, so does that fit with 'responsibility'?
Grammar and vocabulary are good, but you haven't explained your ideas fully.
All the best,
David