Task 1

[ucheoma]

The diagram given is a line graph illustrating the differences in stock prices(in euro) for Outokumpu Company between January 2006 and December 2010

Overall the share prices fluctuated all the period under review with peak periods recorded in 2007 and 2008 while trough periods were recorded at start of 2009.

Starting at about 10 euros in 2006,stock price increased in a linear pattern hitting a climax of 30 euros in a year later. The figure reduced in 2007 with some fluctuations noticed during the period however the year ended at about 22 euros.

2008 saw rising of the amount of shares starting at 22 euro and increasing until reaching its zenith of 30 euro similarly as in 2007.Nevertheless,it plummeted to about 6 euros at the start of 2009.It started growing from about 6 euro to 15 euro and finishing at approximately 11 euro. In 2010,prices took off at about 11 euro and reached 16 euro as the highest point of the year with a sharp to the starting point and almost remained at same rate

[David.IELTS.Examiner]

Hello!

Overall, a good response.

Change 'climax' to peak/high point.
'Reduced' should be used in the passsive.
'a sharp to the starting point'?

Despite some mistakes, the grammar and vocabulary are good and you have described the graph as required.

All the best,
David