General IELTS writing task 1 - Complain to neighbour

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General IELTS writing task 1 - Complain to neighbour

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Q. You have a problem with a neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
• Describe the problem
• Say how long it has been a problem
• Explain what action you want the neighbour to take

Dear neighbour,

I am writing to complain about your recent activities happening at night.

I am your neighbour, living next to you, at 12 Hingingbotham Street. I do understand that you have been trying to fix the things at your kitchen side. But the noises from the drills and other tools are dragging us mad. It has been a week now and I have not been able to concentrate on my important project. With little more than a week for the project completion, I really need to focus on this job. It is critical for my company, and in particular, it is vital for my carrier progression. Therefore, I will have to concentrate on the completion of the assignment on the speculated timeline.

I do acknowledge that you have been trying to minimize the disturbance in the community, I would like to urge you to refrain from letting the workers do overtime especially during the late night.

Looking forward for your cooperation,

Sonam
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Re: General IELTS writing task 1 - Complain to neighbour

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Dear all,

I would like to request you all to kindly assess my writings. My exam is on 25th June 2016.

Thank you for spending your time.

regards,
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Re: General IELTS writing task 1 - Complain to neighbour

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schedup wrote:Q. You have a problem with a neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
• Describe the problem
• Say how long it has been a problem
• Explain what action you want the neighbour to take

Dear neighbour,

I am writing to complain about your recent evening activities.

I am your neighbour from 12 Hingingbotham Street. I do understand that you have been trying to renovate your kitchen. But the noise from the drills and other tools are driving us mad. It has been a week now and I have not been able to concentrate on an important project for work. With little more than a week until the project's deadline, I really need to focus on this job. It is critical for my company, and in particular, it is vital for my carrier progression. Therefore, I will have to concentrate on the completion of this assignment for the coming week.

I do acknowledge that you have been trying to minimize the disturbance to the community, I would like to urge you to refrain from letting the workers do overtime, especially during the late night.

Looking forward for your cooperation,

Sonam
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