The map illustrates Gartsdon town, which is inhabitant by 65,000 people. There is anew supermarket planed to be built on two possible areas shown in the illustration.
At the center of the town lies the town center, which in it's south region is one of the possible areas to build the supermarket. The town center has three main roads. the first main road going from the east of the town center 25km long to reach Crandon, which has a population of 29000 resident. Secondly, is main road that goes from the west to the town center to Bransdon. It is 16km from the town center. Lastly, there is the 12km main road going through the north of the center until it reaches Hindson (10000 population). the town center is surrounded with the residential area.
The industries occupy both the North and the South of Gartsdon. While the railway runs through the town center and the housing area. Between the railway and the 12km main road, precisely to the North-West, is the second place where the market could be built on.
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Hello!
The description of the map is good, but the description of the possible locations of the supermarket requires development. Perhaps you could add a comparison of the two locations?
The range of grammar is narrow and you miss some great opportunities to make good sentences with clauses, e.g. ... to Bransdon which is 16km from Garlsdon.
All the best,
David
The description of the map is good, but the description of the possible locations of the supermarket requires development. Perhaps you could add a comparison of the two locations?
The range of grammar is narrow and you miss some great opportunities to make good sentences with clauses, e.g. ... to Bransdon which is 16km from Garlsdon.
All the best,
David