Please evaluate my task1 letter writing

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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter:

» explain why you were at the restaurant
» describe the problems
» write about the action you want the manager to take
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Begin your letter as- Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam,

I visits your restaurant regularly as you provide wider range of cuisines from Asians to Europeans and Americans. However, today I am writing to complain about the misfortune incident happened during my last visit on 7th January 2017.

It was my promotion party and very special and blissful day. I made a table reservation for 10 persons as I am cognizance of the rush in your café. When we reached there, the table was not ready. Nevertheless, they managed to arrange one for us.

As one of my favourites, I ordered Hyderabadi Biryani along with other side dishes. To our astonishment, we were served with uncooked meat. The entire making was too much salted. Upon inquiry, there was no concrete justification. We had to leave the place uncontended.

We did not aspect such incidences from the reputed eatery like yours and I am also confident that it is against your vision and mission of the company. I want you to penalize the perpetrator for spoiling my occasion. However, the severity is left upto your conscience to judge. I would appreciate to receive a copy of the palpable action taken from your administration pertaining to this matter.


Yours Faithfully,

Sonam

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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter:

» explain why you were at the restaurant
» describe the problems
» write about the action you want the manager to take
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Begin your letter as- Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir/Madam,

I visits your restaurant regularly as you provide a wide range of cuisines from Asia to Europe and America. However, today I am writing to complain about an unfortunate incident that happened during my last visit on 7th January, 2017.

It was my promotion party and a very special and blissful day. I made a table reservation for 10 persons as I am cognizant of the rush in your café. When we arrived, the table was not ready. Nevertheless, they managed to arrange one for us.

As one of my favourites, I ordered Hyderabadi Biryani along with other side dishes. To our astonishment, we were served uncooked meat. The entire meal was too heavily salted. Upon inquiry, there was no concrete justification. We had to leave the place unfed.

We did not expect such an issue from a reputed eatery like yours and I am also confident that it is against your vision and mission of the company. I want you to penalize the perpetrator for spoiling my occasion. However, the severity is left up to your conscience to judge. I would appreciate receiving a copy of the palpable action taken from your administration pertaining to this matter.


Yours Faithfully,

Sonam