Population is growing in all over the world. Is it better to build new homes in already existing homes, or to build new

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Population is growing in all over the world. Is it better to build new homes in already existing homes, or to build new homes in the countryside?

Increasing population is one of the major concern, contemporary world is facing. Some people believe, it is better to rebuild existing buildings, so that we can get accommodate in already populated areas, however others recoil as they feel; it is better to move into countryside. In my opinion, it is important to replace some old buildings with new one as well as to move towards the countryside to find new homes for increasing population.
To begin, with, in order to accommodate the growing population in existing location, we need to tear down the present houses and rebuilt the skyscrapers, so that everyone gets a roof over their heads. Although, it seems illogical to convert each and every house and small buildings into skyscrapers, it does have several benefits. For, instance, by settling total population in specific area, we can conserve natural beauty of countryside, as well as we can save trees which got chopped off during new construction process.
However, constructing new cities on countryside have its own advantages as well as disadvantages. By constructing planned cities little bit far from existing cities, where there is less pollution and less disturbance, serves as advantages over densely populated existing cities. Although, during construction of new homes, thousands of trees get cut-off, consequently, many wildlife animals loose their homes and would not even survive. Secondly, people needs to travel to work in cities; due to living far from existing cities, air pollution will rise because of extra usage of transportation.
Even though, both locations have their own advantages and disadvantages; it is very hard to choose particular location for upsurge population. Although instead of worrying about new accommodation; individuals and governments should try to control and reduce population, so that existing and future generation do not need to worry about such problems.
To recapitulate, we should demolish old small buildings and recreate tall skyscrapers so more people can settle there, although it is not possible to knock every building and private houses; so we have to move to countryside. But during these movement, we should take care of the nature as much as we can.

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Population is growing in all over the world. Is it better to build new homes in already existing homes, or to build new homes in the countryside?

Increasing population is one of the major concerns the contemporary world is facing. Some people believe it is better to rebuild existing buildings so that we can create accommodation in already populated areas. However, others feel it is better to move into the countryside. In my opinion, it is important to replace some old buildings with new ones as well as to move towards the countryside to find new homes for the increasing population.

To begin with, in order to accommodate the growing population in the existing location, we need to tear down present houses and rebuild skyscrapers, so that everyone can have a roof over their head. Although it seems illogical to convert each and every house and small building into skyscrapers, it does have several benefits. For instance, by settling the total population in a specific area, we can conserve the natural beauty of the countryside, as well as saving trees which get chopped down during the new construction process.

However, constructing new cities in the countryside has its own advantages as well as disadvantages. Constructing planned cities some distance from existing cities, where there is less pollution and less disturbance, serves as an advantage over densely-populated existing cities. However, during construction of new homes, thousands of trees get cut down. Consequently, many wild animals lose their homes and may not survive. Secondly, people need to travel to work in cities. Due to living far from existing cities, air pollution will rise because of extra usage of transportation.

Even though both locations have their own advantages and disadvantages, it is very hard to choose a particular location for the increasing population. Instead of worrying about new accommodation, individuals and governments should try to control and reduce the population, so that existing and future generation do not need to worry about such problems.

To recapitulate, we should demolish old, small buildings and create tall skyscrapers so more people can settle there. However, it is not possible to knock down every building and private house, so we have to move to the countryside. But during these movements, we should take care of nature as much as we can.