Enclosed essay where Please advise and score (1-9) in Task response, Coherence & Cohesive, lexical resource and grammati

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Enclosed essay where Please advise and score (1-9) in Task response, Coherence & Cohesive, lexical resource and grammatical range & accuracy, many thanks.

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