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The chart compares the number of books borrowed from a Malton Town library in England in twelve-month period in 2009.
Overall, it can be seen that most of books rented were in August and December months, with 20 and 21 books respectively, while the lowest rate was witnessed in February, March and November periods.
As per information, library materials stood at 10 in January, after which there was a considerable decrease to six books in February. In the following three maonths, local figures showed a considerable increase from 7 to 15 books per month and then the numbers levelled off and remained almost steady in May, June and July. In august, the number of books rented rose significantly by 33 percent. This was followed by fluctuation in the following three months from lowest 9 to the highest 14 books. However, in December the figure soared dramatically to the highest peak of 21 books borrowed.