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shehmed
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Feedback required on an essay introduction paragraph

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Essay: It is necessary for parents to attend parenting training course to bring their children up. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is believed by some that parents are needed to attend child-rearing programs to raise their children. In my opinion, I agree that parents must have a proper parenting training as it will probably help raising healthy and happy children and to minimise their misbehaviours.
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