kindly assess my task 2 thanks.

[tinalongmao]

Currently, anyone can post information on the internet. Therefore, most information on the internet might be inaccurate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Internet provides a platform so that people are able to share information freely and access to informative resources as well. However, it is the low barrier of the internet entrance that raises people’s concern about the accuracy of information they could search online. The quality of online information could be guaranteed if people use internet resources properly and cautiously.

Information provided by official websites would be much more reliable. Instead of general web pages, people could visit websites authorized by a certain brand or a certain department. For instance, if they want to find out some information about a product, they could go to the department store registering with reliable e-commerce platform like Alibaba, rather just browsing some advertisement scrolling aside on the web pages. Or, if people want to find some statistics, it would be better for them to search on official websites like National Bureau of Statistics. Since the accuracy of information presented on these official sites is related to their reputation, the selection of source is also more demanding.

Apart from relying on qualified information from reliable websites, there are still something people themselves could do. First, always be cautious about what they have from the internet and verify it either by applying their own knowledge or asking someone else for suggestion. Even, if it’s possible, by searching on different sites, analyzing and comparing will also help measure whether the result is reliable or not.

In conclusion, internet enables people to access to various information, thus, people should take advantage of the technology by using it in a proper and rational way.

[David.IELTS.Examiner]

Hello!

The main paragraphs are reasonable, but the conclusion doesn't actually answer the question (although the question is so easy and the answer so obvious!).

However, as the main paragraphs are good, with clear examples and good grammar and vocabulary, this essay is not too bad. Just change that conclusion, basically!

All the best,
David

[saqibali]

May I points to aligning the essay much better with the topic?

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Currently, anyone can post information on the internet. Therefore, most information on the internet might be inaccurate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The internet provides a platform so that people are able to share information freely and access informative resources as well. However, it is this low barrier that raises people’s concern about the accuracy of information they search online. The quality of online information could be guaranteed if people use internet resources properly and cautiously.

Information provided by official websites would be much more reliable. Instead of general web pages, people could visit websites authorized by a certain brand or a certain department. For instance, if they want to find out some information about a product, they could go to the department store registered with a reliable e-commerce platform like Alibaba, rather just browsing some advertisement on random web pages. Or, if people want to find some statistics, it would be better for them to search on official websites like the National Bureau of Statistics. Since the accuracy of information presented on these official sites is related to their reputation, the selection of source is also more demanding.

Apart from relying on qualified information from reliable websites, there are still some things people themselves could do. First, always be cautious about what they read online, and verify it either by applying their own knowledge or asking someone else. Even, if it’s possible, by searching on different sites, analyzing and comparing the information will help measure whether the result is reliable or not.

In conclusion, the internet enables people to access to various information, thus, people should take advantage of the technology by using it in a proper and rational way.