help need in reviewing essay

[kongu.suresh]

Hello guys,

I hope that there may be some advance users in the group, Could you please someone review my posting and provide you valuable feedback for me to improve my writing.

Thanks in advance

Suresh

[Ryan]

Hi Suresh,

Yes, that is exactly what this community is for. Please post your writing samples to the 'Post your writing' section to receive feedback.

Ryan