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[Aky]

Describe a competition which you took part in times of school

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[David.IELTS.Examiner]

Hello!

Fluency - Speech is quite slow

Coherence - Good range of connectives used correctly

Vocabulary - Really vague. There are very few details

Grammar - Good basic grammar with some complex structures

Pronunciation - Clear with some intonation

I recommend working on a) speed, b) vocabulary and c) using a wider variety of complex structures

All the best,
David

[Aky]

Thank you very much for your comment