Task 2- discussion- change is always a good thing

[rairaichan0115]

Q: Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.


Throughout the people lives, changing circumstance is unavoidable. While someone would argue that they incline to their lives doing the identical things and attempt to alter anything, many would contend that change is a splendid thing for people. Both sides of this argument will be analyzed before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.

On the one hand, some people are of opinion that they would like doing consistent thing full out of their entire lives. For instance, in the traditional Japan’s culture, all the employees will continue to work at same company until they retired. So that it can manifest their loyalty to the company and also they would not have to face any unexpected challenging. Given the fact that they only have to perform the same task and enjoy to work at the stable working environment. Thus, it is understandable why many people gravitate toward this point of view.

However, on the other sides of this argument, many support the notion that changing is a good matter for people. To illustrate, scientists are always trying to alter our world by their various experimentations. Consequently, out the quality of living standard has been improving all the times. People also can obtain numerous positive advantages from it. After analyzing this fact, it is certainly clear that why many have faith this claim.

In summary, both sides of this argument regarding whether the changing lives are good or bad that have strongly supported. However, after analyzing the two camps it is clear that people can acquire different benefits from changing. Furthermore, I believed that it seems highly advisable for the government to provide more support.

[David.IELTS.Examiner]

Hello!

This is a very good essay. Arguments are clear and well-developed. The range of grammar and vocabulary is very good. There are some high level vocab items, e.g. loyalty, stable working environment, acquire. There are some grammatical errors, but these do not affect meaning and are usually associated with complex structures.

Well done!
David