Kindly check my writing task1 (energy consumption)+(Population in 2010 and 2100)

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1) Essay topics: The following show consumption of energy in 2009 and 2010. Write a summary of the information. Select and report the main features, and make comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The given pie chart and table demonstrates the energy consumptions in six sectors in 2009 and 2010. Generally, worldwide consumption in 2010 was higher than in 2009 in all forms of energy.

In terms of the percentage of each type, oil, coal, and natural gas were the three major sources of energy in 2010 whereas renewables, nuclear, and hydroelectricity made up just over 10 percent of the whole energy used. To be more specific, the consumption of oil was highest at 34% and the second-highest was coal with four percent lower. Natural gas came the third at around one-fourth of the whole world consumption.

Over a decade, there has been a rise of all kinds of energy resources. Even though renewable resource made up only 1% in 2010, it has dramatically increased by about 15 percent since 2009. In addition, coal and natural gas consumption each rose as half as the one for renewables. No significant rise has been observed for the other three.

As a whole, the amount of using energy have changed differently in each sector over ten years, but they have all risen as a general trend.

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The given tables demonstrate the amount of population in millions of top ten countries in 2010 and 2100 projection. Generally, there are broad ranges of the numbers of the population of each country in both years, varying from just over a hundred to over a thousand.

The population growth data in India, USA, Indonesia, Pakistan, and Nigeria are expected to rise whereas those of China and Brazil are expected to decrease in the next nine decades. In addition, India, which was the second-highest in 2010, is going to be the top rank of the table in 2100.

Although some countries, namely: Bangladesh, Russia, and Japan, are predicted to be removed from the top-ten countries list in ninety years to come, the three new countries, which are Tanzania, Democratic Republic of Congo, and the Philippines are introduced into the new list in 2100 projection.