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Question:: To some people studying the past has little value in the modern world.Why do u think it is important ?what will be the effect if children taught history

Answer:
Studying history as a subject in the Curriculum in schools. Some people argue that there is waste of time of learning about the past. However, it is not logical opinion for many reasons.
Firstly, history is the not learning about the past but it is subject of source of facts and roots of human value in the society, which happened years ago. It gives us valuable information about the geography, culture and human society. If we take a note of the historic events like American Revolution, Freedom struggle of India, Apartheid in South Africa Each event has its own importance for Eg: Freedom struggle of India is known for non-violence Movement against the British.
Secondly, the character plays a vital role in the building a society. The character of great leaders like Nelson, mahatma shown in their events to achieve the success in the movement can become the baseline for the present and future.
In addition, children are the people who will lead the world in future so they prepare for this role as leaders. The knowledge which can be gained from history is one of the most important sources of skills understanding human society. They can get inspiration from the leaders and historic events, which help to groom them into responsible Adults to build a better world.
In conclusion, it is undeniable History, the summary of human experience in past, is very important in shaping the lives of the Children and the world..
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